·         Which in class writing was your favorite? Why?

 The one where we watched the video and picked what thing to write in their view that was the most fun ever.

·         Which in class writing was your least favorite? Why?

 None was my least favorite it all help me out with writing and helping out in my life. 

·         Review all your writing chronologically (earliest to latest). List three interesting observations or changes in your writing. Which are the most profound (obvious and important)? Why?

 from my first to my last I have been able to write more and more in the time you gave so one is my typing is getting faster also it easier to think on thing to pick out things I liked and didn't like about what I typed and how my sentence structure I could tell I was getting better at making better sentences.

·         If you could change anything about your writing this semester what would it be? Why?

 I would change what I did in the beginning where I didn't write that much because I thought it was stupid or I didn't like typing but as we did it more and more it became more fun for me. 

·         What did you like best about this course?

The part where we had to put the story together and write about it.

·         What did you like least about this course?

 Were we had to pick 5 word and use our definition then use the other people in our group to use their word and definitions that was hard for me. 

·         What would you have done differently this semester if you could have a do-over?

Show up a little more tried not to skip class because I didn't feel good. 

·         What did learn about yourself as a student, a thinker, a writer this semester?

 I learned that writing is pretty fun I never did it because I don't like to sit and just typed but I had to for this class.

·         What could I, Ms. A., have done differently to improve the course?

 Well I really don't know everything we did had a purpose to what we were going to talk about.

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·         You begin this course with an engagement and participation score of an A.  Attendance, participation in activities and group work help you to maintain this grade.  Evaluate yourself and assign yourself a grade for the in class portion of this course.  Don’t forget the reasoning behind your self assigned grade.

I’d say my in class participation and attendance were great when I was here I always participated a lot when I was here I say my in class participation would be an A but being here a B.

This I Believe

I believe in life that family always comes first. Well this belief is not just about you blood this can extend pass just your real bother or sister and even your parents. It can be also about your friends or the people you grew up with could also part of your family. During high school are grade started to realize that we never had any drama that was just within are grade, we never had any problem with each other we all acted the same. If we had something to say we didn't say something to someone else and talk bad about them, no we went right up to there face and we said it to them I never said we didn't have fights with each other. I mean we threw fist and got it over with. After that it was over and we moved on we were hated in high school because we would always back each other up now matter how stupid we thought the problem was and trust me there were some stupid stuff that the other grades would be mad over something but we back up are grade through anything so we did. What also bonded us closer as a family we weren't the best grade you could say but we were well liked and hated at the same time from the staff of the school which was fun because we always turn are homework in late but still get full credit for because they liked us. I can recall one instance where a kid in the grade above me turned in a paper same time and the teacher didn't say anything but we got them back he asked me what I got and I said 100 and he got a 50 and had the word late by it and I started laughing at him because of it. Another reason I live by that credo is I was in a baseball practice and I got a text from my mom saying my grandma was in the hospital so I went to my coach and said I have to go my grandma is in the hospital and he said on but you will have to sit the bench for the first 3 innings next game and I told him, I don't care and ran to my car needless to say he called me in the next day and ask how she was and proceeded to tell me that I wasn't going to sit the bench next game because how I responded to him and told him thank you for not making sit because I hate doing that and told him if I ever live again that will be why and I said baseball is my life but my family will always trump what I will be doing at that time because they cant be replaced.  

Once upon a time there lived a man named Randy. He was a simple man who lived in the mountains high above a tiny town called Okitraz. Randy was a wacky, simple man who lived off of the land and tried as hard as he could to not enter into this tiny town. Though he tried to avoid it, eventually he would end up needing something from the market. These trips usually took up a whole day causing him to come home famished every time. Now some of you may wonder why Randy tries so hard to avoid this town, well I’m about to tell you why. Back in the early 2000’s Randy walked into town fixin’ to change his life so he bought himself one of those phones. He got all of the special things that the wireless company had to offer. Randy was real proud of himself, catching up with the times and all, but he felt a slight discomfort with the new lingo all the teens were using. Word like “ Freaking, Y’all, Frick, and, Roasting” were being thrown around like nothing. Randy didn't even know what those words meant! So he decided to go visit his granddaughter Sarah who was “really big into that texting stuff “, as Randy would put it. He got to her house and Sarah was happy to see that her grandpa was getting the latest gadgets. He said “ Now Sarah, do you know what the heck ‘Nah Saying’ means? Sarah respond with, “ Yeah grandpa its what you say when you want to know if someone knows what you're talking about.”. Randy looked at her confused, but he decided to just go with it though he didn't know at all what Sarah was talking about. Later that same evening, Sarah made some delicious dinner for the two of them. Randy was craving some hot coffee so he asked if Sarah would brew him up a pot. Twenty minutes later they were sitting on the front porch watching the moon climb higher, and higher into the night sky. “Nascar!” shouted Sarah. “What the heck was that for?” asked Randy “You almost gave me a heart attack!”. “Sorry grandpa, I assumed you already knew! Us young ins shout that at moments of silence.”. “Well thats the weirdest thing i’ve ever heard.” Said Randy. “What else do you kids do for fun?”. “Oh grandpa there are so many things!’’ Sarah said. “Mostly we do things to annoy one another. Like when someone tells us something we like to respond with an ‘okay’ just to end conversation.”. “Hmm…’’ said Randy, “why do you do that?”. Sarah said “ Well because grandpa if someone came up to you talking about bubbles would you want to stand there and listen?”. “Well I suppose not”, said Randy. “Well grandpa that what we do to avoid conversations like that”. 

What if.

I had a million dollars

I had all the exotic cars

The best in all of sports

College was free

Everyone had superpowers

Time travel was possible

There was no racism

There was world peace

Jfk never got shot

Regan was president again

McDonalds never became to

If I had a million dollars I would be so happy because I could compete everything that I wanted to do mostly own a lot of exotic cars and a big house and a summer house on the beach because I could and not have to think about anything but have fun because im rich but I mean eventually id lose money but Id be smart enough to make more then what im spends as in put it in the stock market everyone know buy low sell high so that will help and be partners with so be corporation and that would help also so I never really would have to work and just be a rich person and do nothing but make money. And I could help my family and my true friends out if they needed it I just think it would be awesome to do that mostly because my parents always put me first and I could return the favor but paying for them to go on vacation anywhere they wanted to go so that’s what I would do if I had a million dollars just make more and help my parents and family out.

If time travels was possible I think that would be so cool because you could go back in time and see what really happened and not just listen to a teacher talk about it or watch a movie or a show you could be there for real but you had to fallow a couple of rules you couldn’t redo time so you couldn’t mess it up and cause a ripple effect and you can’t go into the future at all so I think it be cool to go back into the when people first discovered American and see how they were really treated like and how they communicated or go back in Egypt and see the pyramid get built        

  

What if the un set up a world police force I think all the other country that weren’t able to say no would never allow them in their country so right there is a down side and the country that were able to say yes the police forces that they would be nice to then like if they broke a rule they be more leanent on them then other country that broke the same rule and the police force shouldn’t have one chief it should be like America government where no one person could rule them all or gain more power than the other one and all that good stuff id feel like it could break out in to world war three if something happened and the world police couldn’t stop it cause then that country would be really piss off cause they didn’t stop a terrorist  group or a bomb went off before they could be warned or they pick a country over another to save it 

I was flying around when I saw a guy with a great looking doughnut so I wanted it because I’m hungry and I was begged him for it he gave me a little bit but I wanted the whole thing but he would not give me it so I had to attack him then out of nowhere I ended up in a suit case where all these shiny lights where I proceeded to peck at them with my  nose and started to fly and shoot lasers at him so I could get it then he kicked me out and but he still had the doughnut so I flew after him then he threw it away and I got and I was eating it and feeling myself up then  I didn’t feel righ.  

Sports, Cars, animal, outdoors, videogames, superhero movies, fireworks, bombs, superhero things,

Cars, superhero, sports

 I picked cars because I do love working on them any chance I get like it my friends need help with one they call me to help or another friends gets a call we always help each other if we don’t want to pay a lot to go to a mechanic we usually get it done in less time and sometimes better work because it’s are car I’m the electronic guy mostly I can do stereo stuff or speakers and the wiring for the car it comes pretty easy to me.

Fireworks

Fireworks are black powder and cardboard that is they use 200 to 500 grams of black powder in each cake that they are in we call them cakes in the fireworks business why I don’t know why but we do and they use chemicals on the powder to get the red green blues or other colors you see  or to get the crackles.       

Don’t quit

Because I never quit I always try and finish what I do and don’t think about stopping I never put that in my mind why stop when you could keep moving forward why quit when you keep going forward point is don’t ever look back if you mess up just don’t do it again don’t try and make not happen just don’t do it again

red or green because I’m usually chill person but sometimes I’m hyper and crazy but more or less I’m chill person I’m always try and look on the bright side of things but I guess I can be a bull when I see red I could become very angry 

Stress is a two Way Street a little could be good but too much could have a negative impact to your body and your hormones and emotion. She said help other people is a better way to deal with they said they lived better and longer by helping other people and releasing those hormones

I have a one that is me leaving for the army but both of my older siblings have wedding and I really don’t want to miss the weddings at all because I feel like it would hurt them so that’s the biggest one

I feel like if I were them id show that I wasn’t sad about but they would be inside because  I am there brother and I’m the best man in my brother’s wedding so I’m very stuck between ugh.

I think my mom wants me to stay but leave at the same time and my dad I don’t know about my dad he wants me to go but I cant trust him there with my mom

Josh Eubanks

My friends and I always go to the new movies that come that we think we would like but it’s not really main reason we go its fro the trailers before the movie we mostly talk about after the movie and everyone does the after one trailer you will look to your friends and go oh my god yes I can’t wait or you will say that might be good or you will have a straight up no never see that movie then the main movie starts then after that movie you talk on the way home one of your friends instantly become a movie critic that knows all about the movie and why everything was done that way so you try and talk about the upcoming movies so he can shut up because he can’t say much because he only saw about two minutes of the movie or you talk about I like that actor in the role so I have to see it or he is my favorite actor so I have to go and see it no matter what

When the trailers before the movie you will look to your friends and go oh my god yes I can’t wait or you will say that might be good or you will have a straight up no never see that

Movie i'm blanking out right now so I don’t know what  to write  so i'm just typing and hopefully something will come to mind but maybe not because I feel like I chose the hardest subject ever I still cant think of anything I mean the last movie I saw was American sniper and that was good we didn't really talk about it after because it was to sad to talk about so we still haven’t talked about it because we have one friend that’s at basic and i'm tying to go to the army and they already tell me not to go or you should move in with us so there trying to change my mind and all that but it wont happen I have my heart set out for it because I want to do it  

Fear

What is fear? Fear can be anything around you anything that you are scared of some people could have the same fear or people can have a fear of stuff the people don’t even look twice at like scared of heights and some people are scared of spiders and snakes or other animals or people even could be scared of being left alone for too long they don’t like that kind of emptiness around them were no one could help you out when they are needed or fear is all in your mind honestly it how you were maybe grown up like one of your parents were scared of insets so you grew being scared of just because you were taught to be scared but the good thing on fear is that you can beat it you can concur you  fear by making your self do the thing you would never normally do by jumping off a cliff or sky diving or even bungee jumping because that what I would have to do.      

people even could be scared of being left alone for too long they don’t like that kind of emptiness around them were no one could help you out when they are needed or fear is all in your mind honestly about this I think why people are scared to be left alone is that they could go insane because they always had people around to talk about anything they needed but now if everyone a banded them or moved on from what they had and one person could then they would freak out because its change and they could stop it kind of like a control freak they would absolutely lose it. Just like people fear death because there scared of the unknown after death because you don’t know where your loved ones go after that and you can never talk to them again you just assume there in a better place and live on with your life like when I had a wreck once the song that was playing was knocking on heavens doors by guns and roses and I really didn't listen to the song much after that but It came on when I was driving and I let play out and nothing happened so I rock out to the song now every time it comes on.

Just like people fear death because it’s much unknown of what happens like if there really is a heaven or hell or you get reincarnated as a different person like when people say when you die you see the light what if the light is you coming out of the womb again but you forget all of what you remember and you start all over again just keep living as another person and you don’t know what happened or anything but there has been stories of kids solving there murder from there past life because they remember or feel a connection from a place they have never seen or been before. But they know it like they have been just like dayjavo what if that is just something you done before in a life and you were with the same people but there different in the same time. 

I can connect to him because I want to go to the military I do like challenging myself like he did what stood out is that he went to oxford collage that’s probably not an easy school to get into and he said he wanted more challenge in his life kind of what I’m doing I’m going into the army soon looking for a challenge.

I think the purpose of the book is to tell people what he went through doing Navy Seal training and how he always wanted to better himself to be better at anything he attempted.

The audience is people who are interested in military or what goes on trough the battle field or what really happens overseas because all we have is media and they can’t show a lot of what goes on out there.  

Always be honest in what you say to people try and never lie to anyone, even if it mean hurting them by being brutally honest with them. Give everything your all even if you hate it you can say you gave it one-hundred percent .